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I think it is a little prolonged, but interesting use of feet positions!
I tried showing a very casual conversation between my character and her beautician.Telling how she is stuck between her Dad, who is in army and believes a man being someone who could show his manliness by being strong and muscular and tough whereas she always wanted someone who is sensitive and caring, and she did find svabhu who was like that. But at the same time she also wants to feel protected when she is with svabhu and wants him to be physically strong and masculine.Also I tried showing metaphorical references like, cotton balls being put when i refer to restrictions, screaming when getting waxed while referring to someone who is not easily hurt.
oh ho...ashay toh had to be included :-P