I was a little confused about the meaning of your video. I don't think i would be able to read it at first glance, however it is a simple method and is effective in conveying the 'feelings' you wanted to portray of ambiguity and indefinite understandings. I would have liked to have heard a little more of a dialogue. Job well done!
the video choreography is very nicely done with the idea being simplistic. the only error that that i felt were the constant voices behind which in the initial stages of the video seemed to be a part of it...or is it?? also as shreya mentioned above, the idea wasn't clear enough....a nice overall though :-)